Monday, March 9, 2009

On The Outside: Jillian Cantor

Jillian Cantor is the debut author of the newly released The September Sisters. You can find my review of The September Sisters here. You can visit Jillian at her website, her facebook, and her myspace.

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My least favorite part of writing a book is coming up with a title. I always struggle with finding the perfect the words to sum it all up. When I finished writing the first draft of The September Sisters, back in early 2004, I wrestled with the title question for a little while before settling on Even to the Edge. This comes from a line in Shakespeare’s Sonnet 116, which appears in the book at one point. The poem says about love, “. . .it bears out, even to the edge of doom.” I wasn’t sure I loved it as a title, but I couldn’t think of anything better, so I stuck it on the manuscript and started querying agents.

Even to the Edge was the title all through the submission process. Every rejection letter I have (and I saved them all!) turned down a book with this title. Right after the book sold, one of the first things my editor said to me was that she thought the book needed a new, catchier title. I agreed, but I also felt a little stumped. The book had been Even to the Edge for so long, that I almost couldn’t imagine it any other way.

My editor and I both started brainstorming titles. My editor came up with Hearts of Stone (referring to that necklace you see on the front cover) which we both liked but didn’t totally love. I read through the book again, looking for lines that I could pull for a title. I made a list of maybe 20 possibilities, and just before I was about to e-mail my editor, it occurred to me to do something alliterative with sisters. I added to the bottom of the list either The September Sisters or The Sapphire Sisters.

My editor wrote back and said she liked The September Sisters, but she also suggested that the book could be called The Thing With Feathers, after the line in the Emily Dickinson poem “Hope,” “Hope is the thing with feathers.” My editor said she always thought of Abby like that little bird in the poem, fluttering around, trying to keep her head up. She also told me I could choose between the two, and she was fine with going either way.

I’m terrible at making decisions, especially big ones, so I asked my friends and family for advice. Nearly everyone liked The September Sisters better, but I still clung to the other title -- I loved that image of Abby as that bird. Then someone pointed out to me that there was already another book called Hope after the same poem. So it seemed clear that The September Sisters was the best choice. And now I honestly can’t imagine the book with any other title!

If you’ve read the book, you’ll notice that there’s a line in there that talks about how Abby’s mother called her and Becky “The September Sisters” because their birthdays are only one day apart in September. This was actually something I added into the book after we came up with the title. In the earlier version, their mother calls them “turtle twins” instead! Not quite as catchy, huh?

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Thanks Jillian!

Jillian generously offered one signed copy of The September Sisters to one lucky commenter. You have until March 16th, 2009. That's one week from now. Sorry, US only! The comment has to include something about the OTO post.

If any author wants more details on how you can do an On The Outside post with me, please email me at kels.m.17@gmail.com with On The Outside in the subject line and I'll get to you immediately with the details!

K.

29 comments:

  1. I like the name the September Sisters, it's cute. :)

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  2. I like The September Sisters as a title (The Sapphire Sisters sounds good too), but The Thing With Feathers brings to mind some sort of mutant monster, or at least a fantasy story. I understand the connection with the poem, but not everyone would, so it's probably best that the final title was The September Sisters.

    I personally love coming up with titles for stories I write in my free time. Sometimes I come up with titles for possible stories and work from there.

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  3. I like The September Sisters, but I actually think I prefer (slightly) The Thing With Feathers. Because I love Emily Dickinson :-)

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  4. I like the September Sisters, too. Partly b/c I am a September kid myself.

    And titles are super hard, I agree!

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  5. Haha, turtle twins sounds funny! I really like the title The September Sisters, it's very unique and original! And definitely catchier than Even to the Edge, although that was nice too. :)

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  6. I like that you did a post about titles, and The September Sisters is definitely a title that grabs my attention :)

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  7. I like Even to the Edge, but I think the September Sisters definitely fits the book and grabs my attention

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  8. I can imagine how hard it is to come with a catchy title. I am terrible when it comes to decision making!

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  9. I like the September Sisters title best...but maybe its because my bday is in September too!

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  10. I think I would like The Sapphire Sisters as a title too but September Sisters is great. and I would love to get my very own copy!

    sports dot erikalynn at gmail dot com

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  11. I love the cover, so I'm partial to The Sapphire Sisters (plus I love sapphires), but The September Sisters works too. :)

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  12. I love that cover! The blue is a perfect eyecatcher!

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  13. My least favorite part is also coming up with a title. I absolutely hate it but I like how this one turned out. Thanks for the contest!

    katieb206@gmail.com

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  14. I like The September Siters better than Even to the Edge or The Thing With Feathers. For some reason The Thing With Feathers makes me think of fantasy and some crazy creature with feathers, lol.


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  15. For some reason I really like hearing alternate titles for books - I think it provides a lot of insight about the book itself. Thanks for sharing!

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  16. ahaha for some reason almost every title she mentioned didn't scream out to me :( even the title now, The September Sisters is still iffy to me. I guess because there seems to be so may sister titles, like the sisters of misery.

    but! it all depends on the actual content of the book so I love to be included too ;P

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  17. I hate coming up with titles too, but I adore both the author's working title (Even to the Edge) and the final title of The September Sisters. One thing about TSS though... does it remind anyone else of the Traveling Pants books? Weren't they all born in Sept?

    In any case, LOVE the title.

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  18. I think "Even to the Edge" would've been a great title, too. The fact that it was from Shakespeare caught my eye and when I read the excerpt I loved it more.
    But, I can definitely see why "The September Sisters" stuck and I think that's the better choice.
    Either way, I love her choices, I wouldn't be able to come up with titles like that ^_^.

    -EmiLie
    twilight_freak_emma@yahoo.com

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  19. Even though I have not had the chance to read this book, after reading all those titles I think September Sisters just suits it better. I agree, making up titles (aspiring writer here), is one of the best parts of writing a story out.

    --Amber
    sammyjones57(at)hotmail(dot)com

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  20. The title make me wanted to read this series even more

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  21. Great inspiration - both Shakespeare and Emily Dickinson - and great final choice, as I'm partial to September. ;-)

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